gOOD JOB, MAKE THE CHANGES WE'VE JUST TALKED ABOUT. iT NEEDED THE CONCLUSION AT THE END WHICH IS GOOD - THIS SHOWS YOU UNDERSTAND THE CONVENTIONS OF YOUR GENRE. SOUND CHOICES, NICE EXAMPLES AND YOU THINK ABOUT THE CONNOTATIONS OF EACH TECHNICAL ELEMENT THROUGHOUT (although you could have done it a little more). One change you might want to make is when talking about sound. You mention diegetic sound and 'telling jokes'. Maybe you could quote some of them?
gOOD JOB, MAKE THE CHANGES WE'VE JUST TALKED ABOUT. iT NEEDED THE CONCLUSION AT THE END WHICH IS GOOD - THIS SHOWS YOU UNDERSTAND THE CONVENTIONS OF YOUR GENRE. SOUND CHOICES, NICE EXAMPLES AND YOU THINK ABOUT THE CONNOTATIONS OF EACH TECHNICAL ELEMENT THROUGHOUT (although you could have done it a little more). One change you might want to make is when talking about sound. You mention diegetic sound and 'telling jokes'. Maybe you could quote some of them?
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